Healing
spiritual pain
Run from problems again
But hope prevails where pain stops short
Healing
A contest entry
- Cinquain by Yemassee.
554 points, ended June 21, 2008, 23 entries
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This is a big topic for a little poem, and you just hint at the problem and its solution. After running from enough problems and finding them just as close, we have to examine the real causes. "Hope prevails" is a great thought to bear in mind.
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I like those thoughts!
Pain is only endless when we allow it to be.
You thought and said it well.
Nice to see you posting again
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I ran away once....from home...funny how you end up back home...facing more problems than you did when you left the first time...this is my wisdoms of the day....lol
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Being a heathen I can't say I really have any spiritual pain, I have emotional pain by the bucket load but that isn't the same. No idea what it might be like to suffer doubts but I'm sure it hurts as bad as any pain. And as you suggest, hiding isn't going to solve the problem. I guess the answer to doubting ones faith is to apply more faith...that make any sense? Probably not.
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