Turned on at birth
and in a moment
of insane wisdom
he grasped the joy
of infinite exclusion.
Please tell me what you think
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your are awesome
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I think you are a brilliant writer
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sorry i been late getting to read your writings which are awesome great wonderful
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What?
I really wanted to 'get it ', but like our politicians, just couldn't; don't have the mental capacity.
His violin? Excluded because elevated by genius out of the ranks of ordinary folk? (Qui s'eleve, s'isole, as the French Rivarol neatly put it)? Dunno
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Many of the "anomolies" of life have intrigued me, the coral castle in Florida, Mozart, too many scientist to name...........but here I see you capture one or the instance in which it became self aware to one......
I see you use contridicting words conjoined to accent your point, creative! You also accomplish a lifespan in a short measure, very captivating! Saddened I am by the loss of his hearing, the one joy he never regained and I think that is where infinite exclusion denoted this "anomoly" of human essence.
Thank you kindly for sharing this write with us Macandrew. It is always a pleasure to sample bits of your imagery.
HammeR
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Whao! Cool man! This is good!
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Great
I like brevity myself, so many poems are over-written, repetitive, pointlessly long, losing the point in too much information...well done
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Short but had wonderful imagery and insight. beautifully written and expressed.
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i really like this. i wish i could listen to that ipod for real. on a serious not this poem is a beautiful peice which is punctual on delivering many profound thoughts.
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Excellent! How such a short poem can let us see so much.
Great work John!
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A very profound piece. You say so much in just the five lines, ingenious as the master himself. Bravo!!
Sam
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in fact...
I'm bookmarking it
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this is excellent!
and the title ....simply brilliant.
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Thank you for your kind words.
John
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Great Idea but It is to short and not enough information
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