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The Edge of Eternity

I wait for you
on the edge of eternity
the swirling clouds
making it difficult to see
who approaches

I will wait as long as it takes
you will come someday
I know it as sure as I know myself

Our love eternal
passion felt for all time
separated for a time
by a veil of reality
of death

I didn't want to leave
the choice not mine to make
but this is ...to wait
selfish to be the first
to see you again

This almost in between place
is strange and cold
the ache in my heart
making the timeless time here have meaning
as I wait
needing you to feel complete
needing you to cross the bridge
into the light

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  • jasminerose
    July 6, 2008

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    A sad yet hopeful piece about love and how it binds two hearts as one! Lovely imagery and emotion throughout!!
    Thank you so very much for entering my contest!!!
    Jasminerose


  • Charles Johnson
    June 18, 2008
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    cool