Found you in my
thoughts and dreams
reserved you in my heart.
Thought I heard
a heartbeat but
it was you knocking
on my soul that
I never knew
nor met.
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF-Prompt - 15 entries-30words-Reserve and write! by Cannonsfire.
850 points, ended June 18, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I liked it!
I like the way you have combined thought with emotion in this poem. Found in thought and dream, knocking on the heart, imagined seat of emotion. I liked the way this was presented.
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The light of our souls can reflect differently, depending on whom we love.
Beautifully written.
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Lovely work poet! I hear the heartbeat throughout the poem. Excellent!
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I love the last two lines.
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I like your poems, they are really great, keep up the good work and i think you could get even better :], i look forward to reasing more of your poems.
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I like your poems, they are really great, keep up the good work and i think you could get even better :], i look forward to reasing more of your poems.
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Great
Very Ethereal.
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Thank you for a fine entry
C
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Oh I love how you wrote this...it has this enlightening beauty as though a special someone, that perhaps was thought to exist only in dreams, came and helped one realize their soul and the love that is beheld there, showing that it can exist in reality as well.
So sweet..
♥
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