She twists and turns within the wind
the waves at her desire
remembering the feeling of your lips
her heart is now on fire
the sand that shifts beneath her feet
the tears roll down her face
as she shivers in the cold
no longer feeling, your warm embrace
her heart is like a volcano
ready to explode
remembering the memory of your new girl friend
you both ride down the road
as she sits on the ground
her head between her knees
she holds her stomach
here it comes,just stop... please
The crys rain out
as the rain starts to fall
everything drains away
crumbling, her broken wall
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this is amazing!! I love the rhyme especially in the beginning!!! -
Amazing
on stanza three i think you meant explode. Crashing made me think of the beach the way the waves crash in. I like how you incorperated it in with your poem as well. Hopefulyl your character will be alright again one day. Beautiful!
Rose
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