People are all around me.
Except for the ones i want to see.
Left and right i look.
Figuring i would see some one that wants to love me.
Guys are every where.
Many with there girlfriends
Still i continue to look.
Till at last i find the one i want.
Celabrateing is all i can do now that i have you.
Brandon
A contest entry
- I start it for you :) by peridotPixi.
440 points, ended June 19, 2008, 22 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Great poem, keep up the good work
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i really love the beautiful thoughts you have put into this poem, i love how you grabed those letters and ran with them and built a wonderful poem off of those, thank you for the entry to my contest, and as always keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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P E L F G M S T C B
Have fun
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Awwwww bless. xx
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