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I'm sorry for my suicidal note... (Graphic)

Good bye, Good luck, and I'm sorry
The bloods rushing to fast
I can't plug it
So now I will chug it
And my pills are blocking my door

Don't wait, Say goodbye, and I'm sorry
It's filling my empty stomach
I saw my life
Gave into my strife
And the bottle is my only luck

Don't stop me, Don't cry, and I'm sorry
Wait,
now I'm going triple fold
The knife is now in my hold
As I rake this across my skin

It's okay, Don't look back, and I'm sorry
It tastes just as nasty as you said
I wrote this note
Thinking you needed a coat
But I guess I'm still leaving you cold

I'm fine, Stop listening, and I'm sorry
I guess it was as bad as you thought
As I closed my door
My instruments on the floor
I know I will never play anymore

Don't worry, I can't tell you, and I'm sorry
All my secrets you will never know
As I scream silently
And give up finally
And the blood flows freely

Don't give up, It's not worth it, and I'm sorry
I guess all my advice was useless
I ended up losing
And ended up choosing
The death of a lost and stupid soul

Don't try, I'm not listening, and I'm sorry
I wanted to give to the world
But now I'll be dead
Already in my head
And I'm almost done with suicide note

I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I'm sorry
My visions starting to blur
I must hurry and write
Try with all my might
End this suicidal note

I'm so sorry, I'm so sorry, I'm so sorry
I don't see that vision of light
God's left me, that's fair
And now I must despair
Now the torture, I guess, must begin

I'm truly sorry, truly sorry, truly sorry
My hands feel so numb and dead
I must leave soon
I'm headed to my doom
I think life still wasn't worth this

Forgive me, I'm sorry, forgive me....
I must say I'm sorry you've found me gone
But the sky is still as starry
I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I'm sorry
So please, tell everyone I'm so sorry

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Butterfly.Wingz- 5. Write about self injury

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  • Butterfly.Wingz
    October 1, 2008

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    I feel; for you as a self injurer in recovery and i hope for your sake that you can find another way to ease the pain hun there is something to live for i just hope you find it!!!!! xoxox


  • Symphony
    September 19, 2008

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    As someone else mentioned, this was very repetitive but i think that repetition worked in your favour as it mirrored the thoughts of a tortured soul to us.... bravo


  • Ntagatf
    September 14, 2008

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    This is a great write, very repeative though, but thats whats catches my attention.
    Please go back to an and place the option number in it. or you'll be disqualified and i dont want to do that.
    Anyway thank you for entering my contest and good luck, keep up the good work, and i hope this isnt how you really feel. I've been there and it sucks for anyone in that situation.


  • Redeemed15
    September 1, 2008

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    I've been here. Still working on getting out. Meaningful poem.


  • Redeemed15
    September 1, 2008
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    I know how you feel.


  • FallenFromGrace1102
    August 31, 2008

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    this was a remarkable write. it was heart wrenchingly painful. i loved it. i wish you the best of luck in my contest and thank you for entering this piece. I really liked the lines:

    "Forgive me, I'm sorry, forgive me....
    I must say I'm sorry you've found me gone
    But the sky is stil as starry
    I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I'm sorry
    So please, tell everyone I'm so sorry"

    *~*bee*~*


  • z etoile
    June 25, 2008
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    Great job very dark and thank you for entering the contest.


  • XXxXBassMeisterxXxX
    June 24, 2008

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    I have been there which makes this poem even more meaningful. I thought the rhyme seemed a little forced at times, but overall it was good. I totally can relate and that is what i was looking for in my contest. Keep rockin' the writing skillz.

  • kales4
    June 19, 2008
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    Thank you for entering my contest. I just want to say that suicide is never the answer and you're never alone. Anyone who is thinking about suicude or thinks they are depressed should seek help. That said your poem was very good at gripping the emotion of the situation. Well done and good luck


  • Christina-is-crazy
    June 18, 2008
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    This is a great poem, Thanks for entering my contest, and good luck,
    ♥ Christina

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