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Quicksand Castle

Cleopatra laid the tapestry
upon the pool room floor,
smiling with such ecstasy;
another opened door!

Stone by stone she built alone,
though Pharaoh she declined;
He watched, considered every stone,
while Egypt thought him blind.

And as she graced the precipice
of pleasure, prize, and pomp,
she showed him only avarice;
aware, willing to romp.

Now the capstone set in place
has sealed her in her tomb,
as if cast off by her own race;
stillborn, inside the womb.



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But I told her so....

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  • SpiritDarkmaiden
    June 29, 2008
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    O.o Creepy.... I liked the rhyme it seemed to make it flow smoother. Great write!