Take time to close my eyes
Everyone just go away
Keep my heart shut, but open my mind
Live in sorrow another day.
My dreams are my only escape
Stars in my black night sky
Battling all pain when I'm awake
Peace will be mine when I finally die.
Caskets of wood, or silver, or gold!
As for now, I'm tired, I feel too old...
Author notes
My letters were T E K L M S B P C A
A contest entry
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Comments
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i really love the wonderful detials you have used in this poem, i love the feelings and the thoughts and how dreams are an escape, i like how you have took the letters i gave you and built them into a beautiful poem, good luck in the contest and as always keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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