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My Baby Girl

Prettiest girl I've ever seen,
All I need,
Keeping my heart in check,
Making me love her more as the days go by
Before I die, I want to hold her,
Feel her love,
Render her speechless,
See her love,
Christina, my love,
Darling

A contest entry

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    June 20, 2008

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    Its a sweet write

    One mustn't play with hearts less they feel the pain in time for hearts are too fragile but I feel you know this already. Keep writing take care of her heart always


  • peridotPixi
    June 18, 2008

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    this is a beautiful love poem and a wonderful dediction to christina, im sure she appricates it, this poem is far from cheesy thank you for entering and good luck in the contest, keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy


  • Lonely Christina
    June 18, 2008

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    omg! this is the cutest thing! i love when you write poems like this about me i love you!!!
    xoxo- christina


  • peridotPixi
    June 17, 2008
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    P A K M B F R S C D

    Have fun