IN THIS WORLD THERE IS NOTHING GOOD TO SMILE
OR ALEAST NOT FOR ME...I CAN FEEL PAIN
IN EVERY WAY...I CAN SEE MY SADNESS FROM MILES AWAY.
I DON'T WANT ANY MAGGOT TO SEE MY SMILE FOR ANY CHANCE
I'M NOT DRAGGING ABOUT MYSELF..WHO WANTS TO SEE
A DARK'S KID SMILE ANYWAY?
THE WICKEDNESS ENVADES EVERYBODY'S SYSTEMS
WHY TO SMILE IN THIS DARK PATH CALL LIFE?
I DON'T CARE ABOUT THIS WICKED WORLD
BECAUSE I DON'T EVEN CARE ABOUT MYSELF.
WHAT DOES A SMILE MEANS ANYWAY?I CAN'T SMILE
KNOWING IM DEAD INSIDE...THE DARKNESS
THAT IS INSIDE ME IS too big TO LET ME SMILE ONCE AGAIN..
I HATE,I LOVE,I FEEL PAIN...IM A HUMER OR ALEAST
IN A WEIRD WAY....MY SMILE DIE YEARS AGO
WHEN I SAW THE WICKEDNESS OF THIS WORLD...
I HAVE NO EXPRESSION OF GOODNESS
IN MY FACE....I JUST WANT TO GIVE EVERYTHING OUT IN A WAY.
LET ME DIE ..MAYBE I'LL SMILE THEN
IS NOT ANYBODY'S FAULT..IS MY FAULT FOR NOT CARING ANYMORE
I JUST WISH I WOULD BE A BETTER PERSON
BUT THIS WORLD CRUSHED THAT DREAM THE FIRST TIME I TRIED
TO SEE THE LIGHT OF THAT ENDING PATH.
SMILE IF YOU WANT..BUT I WONT..TIL' I REALISE
WHY DO I HAVE TO SMILE...IT MEANS NOTHING TO ME
I JUST WANT TO PASS AWAY.
Author notes
dont mind the spelling i guess
A contest entry
- It's Not Okay to Smile. by Fosh.
350 points, ended July 5, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I HOPe i havent got out of the topic
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yea spellin sux...dark but wat do u expect. i am wrth smilin for...i think.lol
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hehe i bet
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really u think so
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well
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hell no...just got blemish on the chin
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how come?
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log onto aim
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this is very well wrote. i felt that way for almost 15 years of my life., and then i hit rock bottom (literally, there was no where lower for me to go to) but i moved on from there, and things got better.
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im glad that you moved one
me too
this is just my old feelings put togheter
with some death metal music
it makes me feel the same way i used to feel before..but now im much better
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Wow this is written so well
Good job
i like it alot
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xxxx--<3--
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thanks shell(muff)
and glad that you like it
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Wow I really enjoyed this piece, lots of emotion. Nice write
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thanks
but i dont feel this way anymore
i just put my old emtionsz togheter
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