Love that flows,
From deep with in me,
tells me something,
Gives me the call,
Tells me that he's one after all.
so I turn and follow him,
around the corner,
around every bend.......
Until I found out he was with that other girl.... again!
Author notes
The tmnts sister
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Comments
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been there
love it
thanks for entering -
Love is a very strong thing and hard to express, difficult to understand but still very good.
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ouch.
this was really well written, and lovely, the twist at the end was really like...ouch.
thanks for entering
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