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I need Your Love

You hold her close I feel the pain
thats slowly turning into rain
that falls down on me an crushes me deep
already i feel it sinking to my feet
i need your love so hold me tight
maybe i'll get some sleep tonight
instead of waiting all night and day
for you to see I'm standing here
in the cold soft rain

do you need to get over someone ?

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  • arpine1995
    June 19
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    nice

    i really like it! Nice job!!! very deep and loveable!!