No escaping thoughts of you
amidst God's palatte of wonder
captivated like a prisoner
robbing my soul
taking my heart with you
Dreaming the day away
under cerulean skies
as if there was no tomorrows
bringing smiles on brighter days
your presence,
life is worthwhile
as dawn turns into night
whispering thoughts of you
flow like a river
with all I am,
all I see
as my mind rests
in slumbered hypnotism
dreaming the nights away...
...of you
Author notes
LIONSLOVE LAIR CHALLENGE #15
http://allpoetry.com/board/topic/268591861
PROMPT:
Option #4. Dreaming the day away
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Lovely
Thanks for sharing you sweet sis - star
Excellent, and keep up the great works.
Brother Timothy
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What a beautiful read this one is! I love it! And a wonderful take on the prompt! You did amazing with this one!
Thanks for writing for the challenge!!
Nyetta
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Oh my! This is absolutely beautiful. I loved the sweet sincerity. Emotions spill from chalice of pen, as if goblet canted to heart... intoxicating each aching beat individually. The atmosphere is of a steady, soft and soothing gale, serenaded from wintered mountains, into the arc of heated passions. This indeed, is a love ballad designed to melt the core of the most brazen heart. A most enjoyable read my dear friend. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes in the comp
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