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Love's Dreams


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As the dew drips from fuschia hearts
in the verdant green of earth's remorse
fingers reach to gather darts
from the quiver of Cupid's source.

Threaded to the vine of life,
seekers of love hang, waiting,
dreaming of romance free from strife,
dreaming of life's restating.

The mist of man's history flies
allowing sunlight to blush awhile,
illuminating the expectant eyes,
hearts yearning for love’s first smile.


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  • Flying Phoenix
    June 17, 2008

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    I like the approach you took and the diction choosen. I can tell that you choose your words carfully. I like the flow and the stanza form. Good luck in the contest.