My breath is frost
Sweeping flurries into dance
Revealing my love
By cultivated drifts
My hand is morning
Rising to cup little cheeks
Bearing my heart
In glowing crystalline perfections
My song is falling leaves
The last of them to fall
Sharing my life
With ice giant silhouettes
Winter Begins within me
Author notes
12 poets
30-60 words
I think there is 56....
I can't put a picture up.. but here's one for it anyway!
http://www.glasgowwestend.co.uk/gallery/images/snowkids.jpg
In a list
A contest entry
- Semi-Quickie; Prompts 12/30-60 by perfectsunset.
475 points, ended June 30, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I have carefully thought it out and have come to the conclusion... What?... Who you talkin' 'bout?
Comments
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Oh this was such a beauty to read! Loved your November imagery and metaphor; you sure have a way with words. The ending really wrapped it up nicely with "Winter begins within me" -- love that idea.. gives a cool feeling within
Loved it from beginning to end!!
Best of luck & thanks for entering
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This was so lovely!!! I saw this contest but knew that I could NOT do it justice like this!!! Fantastic job and best wishes...
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November**
Hehe thought I'd give ya my fave. month; & my birthday month too
Best of luck homes!
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