Sitting here as the day slowly passes by
As the clouds drift over head and cars rush on by.
As the grass slowly grows
And the trees reach towards the heavens;
I find myself thinking of things
I致e never really thought of before.
Where I値l be in ten years
Who I値l be with
What kind of car I値l drive,
And when my life will end.
But out of all the things I can think of
One thing is always on my mind.
Her sweet brown eyes
her shimmering long brown hair.
Her crooked smile as she smiles at me
And the way that dimple always appears on her cheek.
The way she giggles when I act like a fool
And the way she talks, music to my ears.
No matter what I知 doing
Or where I even am.
I can always be sure that
If I look into the deep recesses
Of this mind of mine
I値l always be able to find her.
I look up as the clouds pass me by
Whispering prophetic truths to each other.
I slowly lean back upon the luscious green grass
And rest my head upon my hands.
I smile as the clouds twist and turn and contort for me
To display your face where it was always meant to be...
Author notes
For my Juliet. I love you so.
Please tell me what you think
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Oh my, this is so sweet!
Really deep at the beginning, full of emotion in the middle, and just perfect at the end!
I can see you there in the grass, watching the clouds, and smile.
Never been in love, but I guess that's how it is supposed to feel.
Good luck for you and Juliet!
Keep on writing - I'm keeping on!
Jo
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Just so you know jo, her name isn't Juliet. Its Carrie. I just call her my Juliet. *smiles*
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very precious!
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AWWW! enlighten me... what is your relationship status with this girl? Well either way it's beautiful. I love days like those.
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relationship status with said girl? Well shes the love of my life. ^_^
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This is truly a very good write I really like it a great deal. Thank you for sharing this with us it is lovely indeed. I look forward to the finished produckt
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Thank you for waiting. xD It is finally finished.
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What you've got so far reminds me of a few Bon Jovi songs
tell me when it's done
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Thank you for waiting. xD It is finally finished.
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