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storm key west

clouds erupting
on the waters edge--
gathering of the storm

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  • cre8tiv-writer
    October 23, 2008
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    I got a chill from this piece...I could see the dark, threatening clouds...this was wonderfully penned!


    • poetgirl25
      October 24, 2008
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      Thank you Cre8tiv; I do appreciate your comment...yes we have been experiencing such storms here and they can be pretty ominous.