She was there
There, Hawaii herself
Native to her lands
Goddess of all the islands
She was there
Waiting for me
Dancing to the beat of distant drums
She was there
Women of the sea
Wahinekai
She was all that was Hawaiian
A contest entry
- Hawaii As Woman by CarolDesjarlais.
525 points, ended June 19, 2008, 4 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Nice poem for the wonderful contest. Congratulations.
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oh I caught an image of her...nciely penned.
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Thanks for the HM trophy
More hardware for my trophy case. Thanks for helping me show case my poetic talent Carol!
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Beautiful!!
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This is fantastic!!! What a great job you did on this one! I could see it all perfectly! How wonderful!!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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