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Thinking out loud

Missing image
Recalling the joy as we awaited your birth
Enjoying each moment for all it was worth
Can’t seem to control this heart stopping race
Kissing your adorable wrinkled up face
Losing you, turned my world upside down
Missing your body in my arms I have found
Simply gets stronger with each passing day
Praying for relief to soon come my way
Tonight when I lay down to sleep
Beautiful visions of you in my heart I’ll keep






Chloe (my granddaughter died at 5 weeks old. 2/22/08 to 3/28/08)
6/17/08
Contest= letters used R,E.C,K,L,M,S,P,T,B

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    June 25, 2008

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    So many emotions in this poem, and how much the pain is etched.
    Never a day passing by with out the thoughts of your beautiful Chloe Lane.
    Love you sis

    Julie

    xx


  • stavykm gold member
    June 19, 2008

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    Precious

    Oh how my heart just breaks for your pain. This is just a beautiful poem of your love being poured out for your precious grand daughter. Oh she is so beautiful and again I'm so sorry for your loss and your pain. I think of you often and pray for you and your family!!
    Much Love Always
    Kelle Marie
    stavykm


  • peridotPixi
    June 18, 2008

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    i really love the thoughts and expressions you have put into this poem you did a wonderful job with the letters and that picture of chloe is beautiful, thank you for your entry, keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy


  • peridotPixi
    June 17, 2008
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    thank you for the entry


  • peridotPixi
    June 17, 2008
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    R E C K L M S P T B

    Have fun

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