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The Tomb

The stone rolled away an empty Tomb, He Lives.

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He lives within my Heart

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  • Darc Rebel Mafia 69
    July 5, 2008

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    i really do like this and i also believe that he lives in everyone's heart just alot of people have to do some real soul searching to find him because of their own doubts ect. thanks for writing this and i hope to see more like it in the future.

  • goalsv
    June 17, 2008
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    AMEN! Short but speaks volume's. Nothing need be said after that!


  • individuality gold member
    June 17, 2008

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    i am smiling here, after i saw you looking in my one liner i though i would see if you had entered and you had. a good spiritual poem - piece - one liner.


  • Dygurl
    June 17, 2008
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    and in mine. great write!