Looking at you,
Anger runs through,
My very veins,
On the fast lane,
Speeding through me.
Twisting and turning,
Swirling and churning,
Through my soul,
Until it leaves a hole,
A missing space.
In a frozen moment,
Abolishment
of love is all I see,
Just you and me,
Screaming.
The punches you throw,
The seeds you sew,
The relationships you break,
The smiles you fake,
Is my life.
My brother is in tears,
For the only thing he fears,
Is you – he can’t bare it,
He can’t deal with your shit,
I don’t blame him.
Because of your foul mouth,
We can only go south
from here – because of you,
We won’t make it through,
A day without blood.
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WoW
let the anger GO
that was so
argghGreat work
I loved it
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Wow what an emotional write... sort of sounds like a verbally abusive parent you are writing about... though I could be wrong and this might be about both an abusive emotionally and physically one as well. Just don't let them destroy you... write about it. Share your feeling with others. A shared pain is a lessoned pain I think. Thanks again for sharing this.
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great work i wish i could say somthing better.
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RAD!
oh my goshh. This is unbelieveable. I love it
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I really like it,theres alot of emotion behind your words. Keep writing
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whoa... and you said that I was the best poet that you know? Look in the mirrow dearie, there lies the best poet. You have a gift, and I love reading your poems. Keep writting.
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whoa
honey...wow...
very good, emotional. I love it. Isnt it so true.
and it makes me want more. to know the story behind it.
very nice.
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I really like this...Its strong and grabs me at my core...its seems like someone you once cared for is now hurting you and your brother...so i hope one day there will be no blood and maybe the sun will shine only for you
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very sad, strong write. stau strong.
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