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Summer skies

My attempt at hand drawing,
with hands that shiver and shake
I think perhaps I would have been better off
to draw a great earthquake
My lines not straight and narrow
they curve to left and right
these hands have a mind of their own
and put up one hell of a fight
But here is my finished drawing
with sunny skies and trees
with colorful flowers in the grass
to please the summer bees

A contest entry

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  • GraphicOholics
    June 27, 2008
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    Awesome job

    I really like it, you say your hand shook but this is really good


  • FifthDove
    June 20, 2008

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    What a great poem and bkgrd/tag. I like how the poem brings the bkgrd and hand drawings to light. Shows just how much work goes into somrthing like this nice work! Thanks for the entry


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    June 18, 2008

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    This is very cute! A little tree family. Daddy's a bigamist.

    No, seriously, hand drawn stuff takes time. I think you did a good job.


  • Cannonsfire
    June 17, 2008
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    lol rebelling against the light I see


    • Sanguinarius
      June 17, 2008
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      LOL believe it or not, that little damned pic took me almost an hour to do


      • Cannonsfire
        June 17, 2008
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        And the subtleties show LOL


        • Sanguinarius
          June 17, 2008
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          oh? how so? lol

          • Cannonsfire
            June 17, 2008
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            the lack of depth and shade lol you just like green don't you and don't want anyone to know! And an apple tree I bet...temptation LOL There are always hidden meanings in everything to me


  • Angelflower
    June 17, 2008

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    AWWWW..well let those hand s shake all they want!
    As long as they're creating such beautiful pieces!
    This was really cute hun! brought a little smile to my face..lol.. But I was just wondering... Is there supposed to be a white line in the Main Background?
    It's really hard to notice but I just didn't know if that was supposed to be there or not? anyway, I really loved this.. It's so sweet and cute! lol.. *hugs*
    Best of luck hun!


    Angel


    • Sanguinarius
      June 17, 2008
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      Thanks much hun, and thanks for pointing that line out to me, It was not supposed to be in there ~Bret~

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