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From the Gap

There is one in my heart,
One who's in my prayer.
Far from light, near the dark,
Swayed by carnal air.

I know Your love,
On wood, with nails, in flesh and blood
Let her know it, like a dove,
By mercy's sails, to rain and flood.

You know the limits of her soul,
What it takes to break her.
Tear her down, to make her whole,
Pursue and run after.

When she is found, bring her near,
Amidst the settling dust.
Wash away tormenting fear,
Replace it with a trust.

Take my gift and give to her,
The grace You gave to me.
Let it wash, let it cure,
Let it make her free.


© Bob Barra, 6-17-08


For D.
(Please pray for her.)

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  • DeGraw
    June 27

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    A heartfelt prayer

    May the Good Lord Bless and You and All Those You Love! Would that we could give grace away. May God Bless You and Yours Temporally and Spiritually!
    I'll pray with and for you,
    DeGraw


  • Samplette gold member
    June 23

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    A beautiful poetic prayer. I will join you in this need and prayer.
    Sam

  • TheM0of

    Similar to the last one This is really good too. Nice Job Brother


    • TheM0of silver member
      June 19
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      Interesting how you saw the similarity. They are related, in that it's about the same person.

      Pray for her, please. I want to see her blessed through repentance.
  • goalsv
    June 17

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    A beautiful way to ask God to help this person. Showing sacrifice for another shows the love for them and God. A wonderful poetic form.

  • mcheadle
    June 17

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    When we carry love for another we are bigger than life

    When we pray for another we are real. God gave us all this and all we have to do is ask and do. Wow to be so like Him in His beauty. God Bless your friend D. and keep her close and give you strength to br there for her always ...mac

  • I am glad I clicked on this,this is really beautiful indeed and what I like is it comes from within,touches the heartstrings and I personally think this is a masterpiece,Hazel
  • Emcchesney
    June 17
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    this was very well written from the heart. great passion was felt within your well written verse. great job

  • you are such a sweet kind soul.

    she has quite a friend in you.

    words of love

    so precious

    lovely write

    my prayers are with your friend

    God bless...

  • wow

    This one can aslo speak about many friends i know. They need to know That God comes frist before any other love. FOr HE is Love the love that out last any storm or challenge
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