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Tears Of Tomorrow (Triolet)

Tears of tomorrow
Replace the joy of yesterday
Life is filled with sorrow
Tears of tomorrow
No solace can I borrow
I can hardly find my way
Tears of tomorrow
Replace the joy of yesterday

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  • jasminerose
    July 6, 2008

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    Perfectly written Triolet that flows beautifully and has profound emotion!
    Thank you so much for sharing your talented pen with us all!!
    Jasminerose