Shaking...
she's shaking,
her perfect teeth chattering,
in the middle of her winter,
in the middle of everyone else's
summer...
summer...
the smell of warmth,
soothing her cries,
soothing her sadness,
but only in her
dreams...
dreams...
when her head hits the pillow,
it erupts,
taking it's chance to rage,
eat away at her with
nightmares...
nightmares...
her shivering reality,
raging and roaring in her head,
mocking and laughing at her failures,
making her want
death...
death...
is that what's going to happen to her?
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rawr
i love the flow of this poem. you people should write lyrics i love them. good write
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its cool how u ended it with a queshden
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So well written, I love it! Good job...
The way it is written is like the selling point, if that makes sense... good write...
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absolutely brilliant. the flow the way it comes together with the words tying knots between stanzas is perfect your imagery and wording all comes together in a single cohesive explosion that grips at the strings of any reader. well done keep it up
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shes fading away into the hands of the deceived to the hands that have made her this way into despair and pain. and all hope been taken away. to the deeps of darkness.
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wow...this was good...i like the use of words...I enjoyed reading this very much...yummy eye candy...lol...keep writing you are a very talented person...i hope to read more...
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i absolutly love the way this is layed out! great write.
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