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December

Weather'd path, quiet and secluded,
I walk alone, into the darkness ahead.
Snow falls though the silence-
caressing my lips, the kiss of an angel.
December never fades away...
Deep hallowed breath of life envelopes the senses,
as I disappear into the abyss of the unknown.

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  • mantis180
    June 17, 2008
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    Beautiful piece.


  • Meroza
    June 17, 2008
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    Wow, I simply just love this! Its short, yet amazing! Well done!

  • Eusebius
    June 17, 2008

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    bravo

    Neat and nifty, nicely done... I love winter poems and this IS a winter poem... loved it, loved it ...bravo... braov... bravo...