Words spoken as vows
Carry the greatest weight
But if not followed through
Create most painful hate
For when love has turned to lies
Words only spoken to deceive
Quickly trust is destroyed
And love will quickly leave
You vowed to never hurt me
You said you loved me too
Sadly you only used me
For not one word was true
Author notes
8. Hate. Somebody you absolutely detest.
3.[I'd stare at the sun for you, allow myself to go blind, because your face is etched in my mind anyway] In AN so I know you've read the rules
A contest entry
- Baby, you would say anything, let's keep to the scripted quotes shall we? by Kiss the girl--x.
525 points, ended July 1, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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the vow to never hurt the one you can quickly turn into a lie...when truth does leave, love slowly dies...beautiful, and thank you much for sharing with me
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Great Write
Well my friend you have penned some very powerful words that many off us feel wen we are betrayed. There is a fine line between love and hate when things go wrong. Thanks for sharing. I can really relate to your words. Thank you for sharting. Take casre.
Bless You,
Sandy
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'You vowed to never hurt me
You said you loved me too
Sadly you only used me
For not one word was true'
I really really really like that last stanza, *finalist*
and I could tell which option you were writing in before I got to your authors notes, which is always a really goody thing
I really like this
Thanks for entering
♥
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this just hits too close to home
although it wasnt marriage
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the vow to love always slowly turned to lies and the truths laying dieing right before your eyes...a very sad yet beautiful write...niaish my friend for sharing and good luck in the contest
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