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Lonesome

There she stands, clutching a teddy bear
In her arms, her bottom lip quivers
As she looks upwards through eyes so fair
They mirror the face of her father,
Standing above her, arms folded, cold
Merciless eyes staring down at his
Child so innocent, so helpless,
She cries for daddy
But daddy doesn’t listen
Instead he looks right through her
As she screams and screams, her tears glisten
And she pulls and pulls at his trouser leg,
Until she realises with shock,
That she’s already dead.

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  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    June 17, 2008

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    this is so very sad and unfortunately something all too many will be able to relate to on at least some level. thank you for sharing this with me today and i wish you the best of luck into this cotnest that you have entered. i am looking forward to reading more from you in the future. viyanna rosemarie