The sunlight reflects through
my empty shell, looking for
the pearl that should be there.
Author notes
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A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words XVI - by Desire.
700 points, ended June 21, 2008, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Lovely poetry here..congrats on the gold!
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Oh. This a cool little poem that you have going on in here. I loved the picture that you have up. That's a really creative one and I could see how it could inspire you to write. I liked how you played with that image in your words too. It made me stop and think. You did a good job of expressing yourself here.
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Empty Shell
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ I kept seeing a mirror but cracked on the left corner also a tiny fracture on the right~ I'm also being shown what looks like a rainbow type of smear- like You
know through a kaleidoscope~ that fractal type of coloring- Also being shown a present but an empty box with a cell phone in it~
Nowwwwwwwwwwwww why I am seeing a cell phone...I am getting You harbor the answer to that
I'm also being shown steps that lead upwards but turn and twist~ like the staircases in Harry Potter- they move- Being shown a marble type of stone~ being flicked into a pool of jewels...all arranged in the center of the circle~
and it feels like many sets of eyes are watching this *game* as You flick the marble~
Hopefully that makes some sense
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
my empty shell, looking...
Unique Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Pretty poem.
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