Lonely eyes
staring azure pavilion,
singular luna
like a scoop of milky ice cream,
gently dripping star sprinkles,
the chandelier of heavens
right up to knocks of twilight,
having lulled everyone
to dream under eyelids,
it fades away.
Author notes
4* Moon strokes the horizon
In a list
A contest entry
- Semi-Quickie; 10/40 Prompts by perfectsunset.
450 points, ended June 18, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Truly inspirational
it blends together the beauty of imagery
under the milky way of thoughts
well done on your HM
Julie
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Thnaks again dear!
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very lovely poem dear.
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Thanks Aliya!Glad you like it!
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astronomical beauty, so sweetly penned 'sister'..cheers to you
bhaya
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Thank you!
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Masterful imagery....it painted pleasent images behind my eyes...great write
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Thank you,,watching the moon is something I like to do!
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It is easy to see
the beauty you see if one takes time to really look with love in their eyes....mac
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Thank you so much dear!
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i love your take on the prompt and with this wonderful background, i love the milky ice cream, i was thinking milky way ice cream actually when you mentioned it, good luck in the contest and as always keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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Delicious ice cream! glad you like it dear
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Wow; intense metaphor and beautiful imagery portrayed. This was a masterpiece in its own. Loved the background too! Amazing write.
Thanks for entering & best of luck
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like a scoop of milky ice cream,
gently dripping star sprinkles,
the chandelier of heavens
right up to knocks of twilight,
Soft and tenderly beautiful.
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Thank you for your kind words!
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