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Wonderful strokes


Lonely eyes
staring azure pavilion,
singular luna
like a scoop of milky ice cream,
gently dripping star sprinkles,
the chandelier of heavens
right up to knocks of twilight,
having lulled everyone
to dream under eyelids,
it fades away.



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4* Moon strokes the horizon

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  • Aliya Abbas silver member
    July 5
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    very lovely poem dear.


  • Venugopal silver member
    June 29

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    astronomical beauty, so sweetly penned 'sister'..cheers to you
    bhaya


  • Ravensdark
    June 22
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    Masterful imagery....it painted pleasent images behind my eyes...great write

  • mcheadle
    June 18
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    It is easy to see

    the beauty you see if one takes time to really look with love in their eyes....mac


  • AmyPixiDust
    June 17

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    i love your take on the prompt and with this wonderful background, i love the milky ice cream, i was thinking milky way ice cream actually when you mentioned it, good luck in the contest and as always keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy


  • perfectsunset
    June 17

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    Wow; intense metaphor and beautiful imagery portrayed. This was a masterpiece in its own. Loved the background too! Amazing write.

    Thanks for entering & best of luck
  • spiritualangel
    June 17

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    like a scoop of milky ice cream,
    gently dripping star sprinkles,
    the chandelier of heavens
    right up to knocks of twilight,

    Soft and tenderly beautiful.

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