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Believe

Believe in the light
Believe in the dark
As you walk down the asphalt darkened streets, the wet tar seeping through yoursocks
The moonlight shining overhead, covering you in a pool of milky light.
The wind blows ever so slightly, the crinkly leaves stirring up everywhere


You look up to the darkened night sky to see blood-thristy bats ready to suck
They swoop down to the ground and eat a single rodent, its huge wings outstretched
Believe in the light, believe in the dark
Believe in nature, believe in your heart

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  • SoftlyScreaming
    June 22, 2008

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    different.. this was very very different.. you went off into something completely opposite of where i thought you were going to go. i mean, its not a bad thing, i just didnt expect it.. good luck and thanks for entering.