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I Want To Run

nothing
    I close my eyes
    I open my heart
    I have nothing
Im empty
    my soul is broken
    my heart is filled with cobwebs
    my mind can not rest
on the outside I look
    fine
    calm
    in control
on the inside I'm
  running
  screaming
  hiding
but there is no where to
    hide
    run
    be happy
normal
  its a word
  I can only guess
  its true meaning

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  • Meroza
    June 17, 2008
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    Wow this poem is powerfull! Well done!