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Silver Wings

Silver wings on butterflies
fluttering in the fading light
the fuchsia hued sunset
sets their wings aglow

glittery silver wings shimmer
nature's diamonds in the sky

A contest entry

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  • Nienna Calmcacil
    October 5, 2008

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    What a peaceful image this poem created in my mind...

    Thank you for writing it! And thanks for entering.


  • Luckintheshadows
    July 7, 2008

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    This is marvelous...simply glitters at me from the page...what beautiful words!

    Thanks so much for sharing this, and for taking the time to enter my contest,

    Luck.


  • xxhoopstar21xx
    June 17, 2008

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    wow!!
    it is short
    and pretty
    and to the point
    and i love it!!
    very great write!!!
    lol once again
    i find you should
    enter
    this in a
    contest
    lol
    and i have no
    idea
    why
    i
    am
    writing
    like this
    lol
    it is kinda of weeird
    lol
    well anyway
    great write
    and great imergry!!!
    loved it
    lol
    i know
    i spelled imergry
    wrong
    lol

    SilverWolf


  • Strify
    June 17, 2008
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    Wow! Beautiful!