I don't think my words
could ever relay the
the fullness of my heart
or the stupid rambling of
my sometimes jumbled mind-
My emotions often run
away from me into
places they should never go
where they stumble on
distance and time-
I have to dream of your
face,your kiss,your touch
because it's not there
for me to see the beauty
of your realness-
I never thought my world
could have the things
that I have seen in your
eyes,felt in your smile
covet and cherish with
my entire soul-
But it's there in your
depths,and I want to
drown there in all that
you are,to die the little
death inside your smile-
It's all I want
you forever,for this
life and the next one.
eternity.
inside your smile.......
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I Love this!
I adore the first two verses... it's me... nothing special, just juxtaposed and jumbled.
Kool write. Kj
PS. I think you wanted "your" instead of "you"... 2nd to last word, 2nd to last verse.
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thanks for the heads up on the "your", yeah I did want that..but as often happens. my brain had a gas bubble.lol...and I missed it..
cheers
K
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always.....
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deep is all that comes to mind as i read this, a kind of depth that you can't help but get sucked into, keep it flowing
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thanks.
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really good i especially like the part where it say ( my emotions often run away from me in places they should never go where they syumble on distance and very) I think everyone feels that once in there life. well written
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thanks for reading, I am glad you liked it.
cheers
Grey
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