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~Peek Within~

Minds blooming like roses
aspiring beauty, merging forth from within.
Flawless captivation fading with time;
old parchment paper weathered and aged,
defining vast journeys.

Long hard roads traveled, painting experiences
on taunt skin canvases.
Personalities intermingling;
gum balls in a jar, colorful and ripe
for the choosing.
Inner light shimmering through,
precipitating happiness,
cracking the iciest of hearts.
Libraries of books on a shelf, dusty;
when open glorious stories to tell,
illuminating from the depth's of ones being.

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  • creationsfromheart
    June 18, 2008

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    Beautiful Mystical wonderful write and awsome bringing to life of a sheet of paper love turning it into parchment wonderful and creative.


  • perfectsunset
    June 17, 2008
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    Wow this was immensely powerful and beautifully worded; well suited for the picture. Wonderful imagery throughout and deep thoughts & emotion. Loved its sincerity and originality.

    Great write!!

    Thanks for entering & best of luck


  • perfectsunset
    June 17, 2008

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    http://www.deviantart.com/print/3084024/

    *If you don't like it let me know, and I will send you another one