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*~*~ Loving Touch ~*~*

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Dreamy eyes caress velvet curves
lips follow excited dew drop pearls

dressed in rose satin blush
bodies flow arched in sensual rush

finely spun exotic ribbons of pleasure
dance across soft scented flesh laced together

Breaths melody whispers contentment in heated air
tender touches of romance holding keeps us there


Author notes

"Magic dances in your fingertips
as you play them along my skin.."
~ J...

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  • Angelflower
    June 22, 2008

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    I really liked your take on the prompt..
    It was really soft and very much sensual..
    The flow was nice and smooth.. you did a wonderful job..Thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck..

    Angel


    • onesugar gold member
      June 22, 2008
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      Thank you for your lovely comment
      Truly appreciated
      ~sugar~

  • midnightblue1272
    June 19, 2008
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    Nice

    Very tastefully done, sis. Lovely words of romance here.


  • Xmjx
    June 18, 2008

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    Such an elegent piece deeply sesnaul I love your sensaul ones there so amazing and always so origanal know one can match you in the arena of sensaul or erotica


  • Ms Sexy silver member
    June 18, 2008
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    I loved this very sensual


  • Swtpoetryman
    June 17, 2008

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    A GOLD TROPHY WINNER, INDEED!

    finely spun exotic ribbons of pleasure
    dance across soft scented flesh laced together

    Very nice, Honey! A sweet and SENSUAL piece (in more ways than one) that is worthy of The Gold - if you ask me. Thanks SO MUCH for sharing this beautiful piece with me!
    Love & Peace!
    Earl.


    • onesugar gold member
      June 17, 2008
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      Appreciate your fab comment, babes
      Always a pleasure to share and have you read
      Love you ~sugar~ xxx


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    June 17, 2008

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    Oh is delicious
    Beautiful imagery of words that paint sensual elegance
    so softy spoken.
    Good luck in the contest hun
    Julie

    • onesugar gold member
      June 17, 2008
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      Thanks hon, for your lovely comment.
      Truly appreciated
      ~sugar~


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    June 17, 2008

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    Very romantic piece this is Sugar. Wonderful, dream-like quality to the piece that carried me away. Very very beautiful indeed. Good luck in the contest hun. Well done, for this fab read.

    With
    Dark
    Love
    Wayne Leon
    xx


    • onesugar gold member
      June 17, 2008
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      Aww, thank you hon for your lovely comment
      glad you enjoyed, sweetie.
      With Dark Love
      ~sugar~ xx


  • Moonlightdragon gold member
    June 17, 2008
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    so very sensual

    like a erotic dream your words touch like fiery feathers

    • onesugar gold member
      June 17, 2008
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      A pleasure to have you read

      Appreciate and value your comment

      ~sugar~


  • Dark Otter
    June 17, 2008

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    Michelle, this is your best

    Wonderful words that speak of a very sensual erotica. This is the best erotica that I have read of yours. It deserves whatever accolades that are given it.


    • onesugar gold member
      June 17, 2008
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      Thank you sweetie for your lovely comment

      Always a pleasure to have you read

      Luv ~sweetness~ xx

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