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Magic

You told me there was
no such thing as magic,
but I've been to the circus
and watched the tricks there.
Hands of the clown moving swiftly through the air.

It's more than disappearing acts,
so just let the wonder flow.

I don't understand
why you can't believe in
what you can not see.
Have a little fun with your imagination
and some faith in me.

Where's the fun in
pretending that illusions aren't real?
Fairies and golbins they breathe and they feel.
You too could see them if you just opened your eyes.
Magic can't be fake otherwise the whole world is telling lies.

Sprinkle some glitter,
wear it in your hair.
You could act like a child,
if only you'd dare.
Some people might laugh
but most wouldn't care.

Get down on your knees,
or climb up a tree.
Just look at the world
and see what others see.
Magic is more than illusions,
at least it is to me. 



Author notes

Probably needs more editing, but I'll look at that later.

Contest-Options Contest for the Creative Mind
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7) No Such Thing

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  • chasingwhiterabbits
    June 20, 2008
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    You should have came back. You probably could have written something great.


    • Megy206
      June 20, 2008
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      I'm sorry. I didn't have the time.
      I'll still finish it though.

      • chasingwhiterabbits
        June 20, 2008
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        Oh it's okay. It's too bad you couldn't finish before the contest ended. But when you do write it, tell me. I'd be happy to still read it.


        • Megy206
          June 20, 2008
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          Ok. Thanks.

          • chasingwhiterabbits
            June 30, 2008
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            I really like how the poem turned out. It's just...haha, magical. It definitely would have made the finalists list, probably would have won at least an honorable mention.

            Thanks for telling me that you finished it! I have another contest going if you're interested. Options again

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