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The Operation



There was a rainbow overhead
and the sky was shining bright,
this seemed very strange
it was the middle of the night.

I had to go outside and see
just what had taken place,
thinking it must be a ufo
come down from outer space.

Feeling pretty frightened
I opened up the door,
and found myself in a place
I'd never been before.

There were people but I couldn't see
everything was so white,
then I heard a voice softly say
you are in the land of light.

I asked if I were here to stay
they said they didn't know,
a lot depends on will power
and the skill of those below.

So peaceful and relaxing
everything felt so right,
the perfection of tranquility
here in the land of light.

Suddenly I was being pulled
the white was turning grey,
as though by some magnetic force
I was being drawn away.

A white coated man was talking to me
saying young man I must confess,
the operation was touch and go
but resulted in total success.

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