life moves,
losing smiles
also sorrows,
manifest flowers
see them wither away,
before very eyes,
hope burns
desiring next immortal
A contest entry
- Quickie Quote Prompt # 6 by BluesMan.
875 points, ended July 16, 2008, 32 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Even in lifes final breath there is hope for what lies ahead The direction you took the prompt pleasantly surprised me Thank you for entering my contest
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I would say hope flourishes and that love burns.
and though flowers may wither, there is a new beauty within them, and that is age accompanied by wisdom.
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hope burns
desiring next immortal
Excellent lines..all the best in the contest!
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ife moves,
losing smiles
also sorrows,
manifest flowers
see them wither away,
before very eyes,
hope burns
desiring next immortal wonderful poem with a great deal of depth the title says just as much as the words good luck in the contest
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