And If I'd hate myself
for loving you
for all of these things
you never knew
If I lost the ability
to actually see
the ineveitablity
of you seeing me
If I lose myself
inside your eyes
and he loses me
between my thighs
and we're all lost
as she cries
How well can we
expect to be treated
when all of our crimes
twice have been repeated?
A contest entry
- Teens & Young Adults by DAMSELx.
300 points, ended August 30, 2008, 101 entries
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1000 points, ended November 10, 2008, 63 entries
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Comments
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Hum, not sure how to interprut this particular peice actually... I get the basis of it. Sometimes its hard with short poems to figure out exactly what it is they are talking about. The poem however is pretty good, short as it is its still interesting and captivating. Thank you for entering my contest.
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