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Wisdom within

Merry met and merry part
We grow from one
The goddess above
Although we are strangers before this path
Repeat and rejoice
For we are one

In live we walk strong
Under the moon of the mother
Through the mountains of the green man wise
Drinking in the beauty of our earth
The knowledge of our time
And the time of the moons before us

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  • Anguas-Confusion gold member
    June 17

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    wow... well done gorgeous, this is awesome. I really like it. The only thing I would alter is the first line of the second stanza "live" I think should be life to fit in with the context of the line.
    Well done gorgeous. xxxxxxx

  • Angelflower Greeters member
    June 17

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    Wonderful my shadow angel!
    You did such a wonderful job!!
    Touches the heart within..

    Blessed Be..

    Angel

  • Hope Angel
    June 17
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    well done
    I love you