keep thinking
somebody way up here
loves ya
Author notes
I hope humour is OK in Haiku.
A contest entry
- SURVIVAL HAIKU by Swan song.
650 points, ended June 23, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Thank you marlene. but I think that his eagle family were the ones who were going to love him
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I take this as a scary thing - glad that the eagle rather eat fish that eat people. Congratulations on the bronze.
Marlene -
I love how you took on
the eagle's perspective
but most how
wise the eagle was.
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excellent take on the prompt
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Aww... this is very cute. It worked very well, and it put a smile on my face. I think humor works very well in haikus. well done!
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