dreams split
fell like asteroids,
careless word of mouth,
stroke of pen in flow,
shot from gun,
resuscitate them scattered
images separate,
never knit into one
however close they come
A contest entry
- Quickie:: Are you up for it? by Fallen Grace.
600 points, ended June 18, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is a really amazing poem, you did a wonderful job. I can see you have a lot on your mind.
Great job and good luck in the contest!
-♥
Beautifully-Bound -
Wow, this is such a deep write. I really enjoyed the imagery you used here, it is so strong. Well done and all the best for the contest my friend.
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