Treading upon dreamy clouds of trust,
each step with a sigh of caution,
as gems sparkle clear and bright
among ebony barks,
like your love drizzle
on my parched soul-
mummified
with coups-
hatched.
Author notes
this is a form piece, a Nonet.
structured:
line 1 - 9 syllables
line 2 - 8 syllables
line 3 - 7 syllables
line 4 - 6 syllables
line 5 - 5 syllables
line 6 - 4 syllables
line 7 - 3 syllables
line 8 - 2 syllables
line 9 - 1 syllable
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A contest entry
- Spill Some Ink My Way by jasminerose.
850 points, ended July 6, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Such a beautiful form! Flowing effortlessly through this splendid imagery, capturing the picture with deep emotion leaves me to say only this, Lovely!
Thank you for this beautiful entry to my contest!
Jasminerose
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this is cool, i dont do form poetry very often, i love the way it spills out all over the page, wonderful flow and take on the picture, good luck in the contest and as always keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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Thanks a lot dear for your wonderful wishes!
hug*
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EXCELLENT~!~!
oh my word...this is STELLAR!!!!!!!!
i see a trophy for sure!
love it!! great nonet!, and i really love the form!
I especially like:
like your love drizzle
on my parched soul-
mummified
with coups-
hatched
SO amazing,
best of luck in the contest!
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Thanks dear...Glad they brought out the effect I had in mind lol
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