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Would I lie to you

Belive me for I won't lie to you

For my every word is true

He came in threw the window blood in his eye

All I could do is hide under my bed and cry

He killed my mom and dad

Shooting them over and over that man so bad

He took the pillow and put it over there faces

He watched my mother and father die at diffrent paces

Then he searched the room for money

He let out a little chuckle as if it was funny

Then he left

I rushed to the phone never going into my parents room I couldn't bare the pain

Help I scream they must of thought I was insane

The cops came to the house and they rushed me away

So ill swear on the bible that man sitting there is guilty I say

He is now convicted of murder in the first degree

Every one new it was him it was easy for the jury to see

The next door neighbor was the bad man

Five foot seven inches a man named Dan

He went to jail sentenced to death

I will see to it that electric will take his last breath

I was in my room hiding though

So how would I know

All the details of the crime scene

And remember I never went in the room at all

So I killed them not of hate not of fear just to be mean

But now my neighbor is dead

So all of you that I fulled put a non guilty man on his death bed

Belive me now for this is true

Hey would I lie to you

Author notes

Hi I hope you like my poem I think it suits the contests well and I no its probely not as good as some of your older ap poets entries m being only 14 but I have a fealing you are going to like it I hope I am right thx for your time in reading all this.P.S I explained my lie in my story and also I can't use spell check on my phone were I wright all this and I am willing to admit I am not that good of speller lol

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  • BefuddledPerson
    July 18
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    WOW!This was fabulously brilliant!I was captivated the whole time.Congratz on the HM!Great write!


  • Justin
    June 17
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    Wow... the ending of this poem was kinda brilliant... considering the prompt and all. You did a great job with this, and yeah... I did count quite a few misspelled words... so look into using spellcheck as soon as you can!

    There was a lot of emotion in this. Thank you for your entry!