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The Teddy

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The Teddy – Ian

Looks with melancholy from the window of her room,
Hopes to see him striding down the path,
Needs to have him hold her as he wipes away her gloom,
He knows just how to make his daughter laugh.

Teddy had been naughty so she’d thrown him on the floor,
Saw the buttons fly and stitches break,
Shed her tears while thinking of the punishment in store,
The thought of it was more than she could take.

There, at last he’s coming she can see him on the way,
Picks up teddy finds the buttons two,
When he sees her teddy now she wonders what he’ll say
Will he fix it with her paper glue?

“Where’s my darling daughter?” she can hear him at the door
Looks at broken teddy by her side,
For a change she’s silent as she creeps across the floor
Tempted now to run away and hide.

Daddy enters quickly and he gives a cheery call
Sees his girl in tears standing still
Puzzled asked the question, “Did your teddy take a fall?”
Tries to hold her tears but lacks the will.

Daddy takes his daughter dear enfolds her in his arm
Carries her and teddy to his den,
There repairs the teddy and restores it’s former charm
And now has daughter smiling once again.

Are you going to punish me for breaking teddy bear?
A fearful face upon this little elf
Daddy hugs and kisses her, “Would that be really fair?”
Tears are surely punishment itself.

“© Ian Grice 2008”

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  • penman gold member
    September 18, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very nicely written. So well expressed. Thank you for sharing. It was a pleasure to read.


  • Bee gee silver member
    July 27, 2008
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    very Nice

    This very nice and a teddy bear tale it'self.the punishment was enough the child so upset and fearing daddy would be mad. sometimes that's all it takes.i will book mark this and read more along the way.alos i will place you as a favorite.and return as many times as i can.i'll check out the web page you gave too.once again very nice.Bee gee


  • Pearl-1
    June 18, 2008
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    awww Ian this is a sweet write..i can remember chucking me toys and breaking them..xxx