Essence of my life
you've seen my glazed tears
under moonlight haze.
Falling stars
you caught
with lips kiss.
Stirring my souls spirit
believing upon your touch.
No fear,
lingers in your
hushed lullaby's whisper.
Deep eyes call my heart
to beat,
fluttering butterflies.
Strong arms beckon me
to crawl into
loves embrace.
Safety lives within your belonging.
Strengthened under your inspiration
moved like a child,
blowing hair from her face.
You capture my smile
knowing...
I am tranquilly in your presence.
Author notes
Dedicated to Tim.
As Long As You Love Me
A contest entry
- A-B - Titles Contest! Lots of Choice!!! by Midnight-x-Rose.
850 points, ended June 23, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Congrats!
My congratulations on winning the contest. I thought your piece was very well written, full of feeling and love. Well done.
Maska
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There is a sense of belonging, a feeling of deep rootedness that lends this poem a strength. Well done.
Love Tom B.
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Beautifully written very romantic and sweet, the love comes across here. I love the song and I love the way you work your own feelings into the title, making it personal and menaingful.
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I do
Love, this is beautiful. It touched me when you read it to me earlier, and now that I can sit and let the words sink in off the screen I am impacted even more so...
Strengthened under your inspiration
moved like a child,
blowing hair from her face.
You capture my smile
knowing...
I am tranquilly in your presence.
~ I have to smile, I love it when you blow the hair from your face
Nicely done, Beloved, and thank you.
I love you~
Tim
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