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The way the colors blend together
Reflecting the beauty in your eyes
Outlining you in all of your glory
As we share this breathtaking view
This perfect sunset

Standing together in silence
Pleasant and welcoming, not awkward
Enjoying this amazing moment
No distractions, no drama
Just you and I

Though this moment is perfect
Only the sunrise will show if tomorrow starts the way this day ends
With you and I together
Sharing another perfect moment
No distractions, no drama

Only love

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  • Shydreamer3
    July 14, 2008

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    man i wish a guy would write me something like this. this was one of my ultimate favorite poems u wrote its beautiful. I loved it.


    • Fading Memory
      July 14, 2008
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      Thank you for the comment. I didn't really write it for anyone, just a hoping that someday it will happen someday kinda thing.

  • luv2dream gold member
    June 24, 2008

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    I think this is beautiful!" Only the sunrise will show if tomorrowstarts the way this day ends"..love the line..

  • luv2dream gold member
    June 18, 2008
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    Very beautiful. I like colors blending together and standing together in silence..Sets a wonderful tone.
    The most beautiful things are the simple pleasures like the sunsets.

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