Water
Raging current
Clear cascading ripples
Turbulent boils spraying liquid
Rapids
In a list
A contest entry
- Cinquain by Yemassee.
554 points, ended June 21, 2008, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Now this sounds like a good time... I sure miss rafting down the Clackamas River in Oregon... It was like a crazy Summer friend unpredictable and yet so familiar... Nice!
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Thank you Ithaca for reading and commenting, glad you enjoyed.
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Excellent Ride
You were
There,thank you for
A most exciting ride
Did not even have to get wet
Well Done
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Thank you Bob for reading and commenting.
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whooooooooohoooooo take me with you next time! This sounds wonderful!!
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It is quite the rush, eskimo rolls, hitting the V in the rapids, playing in the boils. Its quite an experience. Thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate it.
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for some reason I found myself rewriting this this action packed cinquain...so many different ways to word it without using alternate words....great job with what you presented
Mal
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Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate it.
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Excellent
What a perfectly penned Cinquain.
Best of luck to you in the contest. Well done. Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful talents with us.
*S* Cynthia
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Thank you Cynthia for reading and commenting. I really love doing the cinquain form.
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What I really like about this cinquain is how it seems to resemble the action that you write about. It flows along, seems to increase in intensity like the rapids it protrays. My friend Beaumont will have to admit, there are folk on AP who can write a good cinquain. Thanks for entering the contest.
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Thanks for considering my cinquain in you contest and the applause
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Beautiful write, Charley. Wonderful poetic form and flow. Lots of imagery in this piece. The words creates a picture of a river. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
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Thanks Haley, glad you enjoyed. I like working with this form, it always generates a flow. Thanks for the luck in the contest and for reading and commenting.
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